Linda Acaster
Oct 8, 2023

Spectacular. I wish the new venture well.

However [cripes, I sound like an agent] I am surprised you are using spaced block paragraphing instead of indented, and double < > instead of " " (American-English) to enclose speech. The pair together rocked me back out of the opening lines.

It might be something you want to consider before getting too far into your long book list.

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Linda Acaster
Linda Acaster

Written by Linda Acaster

British multi-genre fiction author who haunts historical sites - check out her publication 'Escape Into History'. For novel links: www.lindaacaster.com

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